R9 if you're going to cunt, at least do it correctly.
I put this post you wrote into ChatGPT:
[quote]"Please explain everything grammatically wrong with this post: "Yes, men are violent more often, but that's not the point here. Women committing violence against men still receive more passes than men do, not that anyone committing assault should get any passes, period). Our culture generally accepts women slapping, punching, pinching, shoving and otherwise doing harm to men. It's in homes and on the street, and part of tv/media tropes. How many doctoral theses have been presented on this topic, versus the ubiquitous academic pummeling going on concerning normative male domination and subjugation, historical patterns and current crises in othership encapsulation challenges and the self-selected paradigm of gender-based hierarchies?"
Here is an analysis of the grammatical issues in the given post:
1. Unclear Antecedent: • “Yes, men are violent more often, but that’s not the point here.” • The phrase “that’s not the point here” is vague and could be clarified.
2. Redundant Use of Commas and Parentheses: • “Women committing violence against men still receive more passes than men do, not that anyone committing assault should get any passes, period).” • The comma before the parenthesis and the closing parenthesis is unnecessary. Parentheses should not be used here.
3. Inconsistent Tense and Agreement: • “Women committing violence against men still receive more passes than men do, not that anyone committing assault should get any passes, period).” • “receive” should match the subject “Women.” Also, it would be clearer to use the present continuous “are committing” to match the ongoing nature implied by “still.”
4. Misplaced Modifier: • “It’s in homes and on the street, and part of tv/media tropes.” • The subject “It” is unclear. It should specify what “It” refers to.
5. Run-on Sentences and Sentence Fragments: • The sentence “How many doctoral theses have been presented on this topic, versus the ubiquitous academic pummeling going on concerning normative male domination and subjugation, historical patterns and current crises in othership encapsulation challenges and the self-selected paradigm of gender-based hierarchies?” is overly long and convoluted. Break it into clearer, shorter sentences.
6. Unclear Subject and Verb Agreement: • “How many doctoral theses have been presented on this topic, versus the ubiquitous academic pummeling going on concerning normative male domination and subjugation, historical patterns and current crises in othership encapsulation challenges and the self-selected paradigm of gender-based hierarchies?” • The subject “How many doctoral theses” does not clearly connect with the rest of the sentence.
7. Inconsistent Use of Capitalization: • “tv/media” should be “TV/media.”
8. Ambiguity and Complexity: • The phrase “othership encapsulation challenges” is unclear and overly complex. Simplify for clarity.
Here is a revised version of the post for improved grammar and clarity:
“Yes, men are violent more often, but that’s not the point here. Women committing violence against men still receive more leniency than men do. However, no one committing assault should receive any leniency, period. Our culture generally accepts women slapping, punching, pinching, shoving, and otherwise harming men. This acceptance is evident in homes, on the street, and as part of TV/media tropes. How many doctoral theses have been presented on this topic compared to the numerous academic discussions about normative male domination, subjugation, historical patterns, and current crises in gender-based hierarchies?”
This revision addresses the grammatical issues and clarifies the argument.